i think your contents page is quite simple and plain. it hardly has colour to it which makes it kinda boring, dont get me wrong pleaseee :) i think your pictures at the back are quite squashed or shrinked etc. i think you should have made your own advertisements rather than getting pictures off the internet.. and another point id'e like to add, i think the box around sonic makes it look very amature. i think you should also use more than one colour for your font :)
the contents page is simple and plain and the pictures are not organised in the same coloumn. the images are from the internet which isnt allowed moreover the cartoon doesnt reflect back to the genre of the magazine.
i think your contents page is quite simple and plain. it hardly has colour to it which makes it kinda boring, dont get me wrong pleaseee :) i think your pictures at the back are quite squashed or shrinked etc. i think you should have made your own advertisements rather than getting pictures off the internet.. and another point id'e like to add, i think the box around sonic makes it look very amature. i think you should also use more than one colour for your font :)
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have put the contents page together. The pictures that you have taken are really too but not all the pictures are your own.
ReplyDeletethe contents page is simple and plain and the pictures are not organised in the same coloumn. the images are from the internet which isnt allowed moreover the cartoon doesnt reflect back to the genre of the magazine.
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